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Author Topic: Help For Iceblade?  (Read 677 times)
a_n_e_m_o_n_e
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« Reply #15 on: February 04, 2010, 03:08:51 PM »

simple - they provoke him, the dragon in him awakens and wreaks havoc  their enemies, when Toxas (or Experiment 42) tries to turn on them they use a shock collar to keep him at bay. but it backfired. Now he turns into a dragon when scared, meaning they'll end up with a huge monster that will not fight. a total failure in their eyes.
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« Reply #16 on: February 07, 2010, 05:23:53 PM »

Alright, I see how that would work...
What other characters do you need help with?
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« Reply #17 on: February 07, 2010, 06:31:09 PM »

developing romances, but we could put that off. i want romance in my story, but i don't want it cheesy.

I want to try to develop Sasha's character more (I renamed Jericho). he's Daxonnov's boyfriend, but i don't have much of a background on him. so far, all we know is that he's really pretty for a boy (pink eyes, lavender hair, tan skin), he's shy and worrisome, and he's a master of disguise.

i also want to develop Emmett's group of frineds more. also, Emmett himself.


take your pic, i got all night. i work the night shift at denny's every now and then, and they let me play around on the computer so long as i give correct change.

derp derp derp.

Post Merge: February 07, 2010, 06:33:25 PM
oh, and i have an awesome idea for your story, if you're willing to hear me out. how about on some of the planets farthest from the sun, some of the vegetation glows. i'm thinking blueglow/black color scheme for Yurr. i don't know why, but i like the idea....
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Flower, pretty flower
I stop to smell you
YOU TAKE MY NOSE AWAY
Wait a minute
Why are you so sharp?
You are not a flower
Now I have no nose
Face, bloody face

-AskANinja
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